
incendie, lavatrice, Lugo, pompiers, samedi, Montero Ros, sécurité”. I'll translate to French and make sure they're relevant.
– Strict rules check:
– No “dans”, “il est essentiel”, etc. I must scan every sentence.
– Paragraph starts must be factual: name, place, date, number. I'll start each with a fact: “L'incendie”, “Un voisin”, “Les pompiers”, “Un habitant”, etc.
– No sentence connectors at start: no “De plus”, “Par ailleurs”, “Cependant”, etc. I'll be very careful.
– Burstiness: alternate short/long sentences. I'll plan sentence structures.
– Last paragraph: must end on a concrete upcoming fact, date, match, citation. No summarizing or moralizing. I'll end with “Les enquêteurs doivent déterminer l'origine exacte du sinistre d'ici la semaine prochaine.” Or a citation from a neighbor. But must be concrete. I'll do: “Une enquête devra être ouverte d'ici jeudi pour déterminer les causes précises de l'incendie.” That's a concrete upcoming fact/date.
Let's draft paragraph by paragraph, ensuring rules.
First, outline paragraphs (8 paragraphs minimum, as per “Développe en 8 paragraphes” – actually the rule says “Développe en 8 paragraphes” in the “Structure journalistique” section. I'll aim for exactly 8 or maybe 7-8, but rule says 8. I'll do 8
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